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Acrostic *Shahrzad* *Maftooh*

Acrostic Shahrzad Maftooh

Sharzhad Maftooh is a Pixie who hides amidst blossoms wide.
Her laugh says as mortals try to aspy what Pixie light confides
And her modesty exposed is always shown in her magic repose
How beyond the eyes view she flits close to your nose.
Run quick cannot you see all the love and light she feels.
Zephyrs are by her sealed as she her love for you reveals.
And yet staring you see not her beauty for your eyes exposed
Dreams of flowers kissing your hand is what she chose.

Mankind so proud they cannot see what the breeze steals
And call their inspiration something they all just feel
For truth be told my Pixie has her wings to you unfold
To lead you to the lands which the ancients have foretold.
Oh heart of light and love that takes itself alight
Of you I speak who visits mankind's dream hearts at night.
How is it they still fight and gripe while you inspire right?

by Iohagh

Author notes

Some people have beautiful hearts and they are always Pixies.
Written January 11th, 2006

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  • Vernal Bloom
    August 15, 2007
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    I came to this page from Shahrzad’s page. Actually she’s my AP sis and I love her and whomever she loves! She is indeed as sweet as sugar and her hugs is sent whenever they are needed.
    This is really a beautiful acrostic you wrote for her. I see she’s all smiling after reading this. Thanks for sharing with us

    ~Vernal Bloom~


  • Iohagh
    February 27, 2006
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    I changed your picture. Hope you like it.

  • Ir.muse
    January 11, 2006
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    My dear lovely Vic,
    This is really a wonderful comment. Really appreciate it.You're such a wonderful friend for me.
    Shahrzad

  • Iohagh
    January 11, 2006
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    I would like to think of you like a sister because of our ages. Lets say we are Pixie blooms who fight the doom and gloom. LOL. Pixies love the world. Ciao.

  • Ir.muse
    January 11, 2006
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    Thanks my lovely mom.Really appreciate your lovely comment.
    It was such a pleasure for me to read this poem which is written for me.
    Shahrzad


  • eternalpoet
    January 11, 2006
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    5 Stars *****

    Oh yes, nice person she is a wonderful poem, i am very happy to have read this poem... infact she deserves such poems on herself, she always make me happy with her nice talks and comments, she listens to my silly gilly talks carefully and when i am talking to her i am sure that she IS reading me, and then she is such a wonderful person at heart, i have done few mistake yet she always forgives me,

    i guess i read a very nice poem for a very nice person from a very nice person ... nice write.. good work.. thanks for sharing my dear friend


    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend.. just keep it up... your humble little friend... ... .... .... - vic ( who else? )


  • catz Moderators member
    January 11, 2006
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    What a beautifully thoughtful acrostic you've written for our friend. Shahrzad is truly a wonderful person and you've done her justice with this nice piece written for her

    She's a special lady


    Dee

    Edited on Jan 11, 2:32 p.m. because ''.

  • Iohagh
    January 11, 2006
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    Check I corrected it for you and you are a collaborator so that all comments are like Pixie dust. Change what you like.

  • Ir.muse
    January 11, 2006
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    This is for me?OH!Thanks so much.It feels so good to have a special poem like this. KISS*
    You're really wonderful dear Janet.It's such a pleasant surprise.
    Shahrzad

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