I stand on the edge,
the edge of darkness,
a twilight whisper calls to me,
my soul screams to see who whispers this dark secret.
My mind holds back refusing to believe,
the illusion in front of me.
Oh sweet darkness stop calling.
My steps do not follow into this deed.
My future seeks a deeper seam.
Author notes
I really like this poem. heh It's really rare when I acutally like something I wrote. Feel free to post thoughts ideas ect ect ect on it. 
Written January 11th, 2006
A contest entry
- Anything u want! prewrites allowed!!!! by ILUVuBUTuDONTluvME.
300 points, ended August 26, 2006, 33 entries
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I liked this. It flowed well and caught my attention. Nice work. FaeryPixieFey
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I really like this poem you did a great job expressing yourself. on thing though, you use the word 'me' to many times.
otherwise this is great!
thank you for your comment on my poem 'memories' it means alot
-kathy-
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