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Just Friends

a boy is in love
yet the girl doesn't notice
she thinks they're just friends

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This is true about me.  She's on this site too.  I like her personality, her poems, and her go-get-um attitude.  I hope she reads this!

Inuyasha
Written January 10th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • GreenKat92
    October 19, 2006
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    Mui Magnifique!

    i like this... i'm just woundering how you are going to remix a haiku... Don't tell me! So who was the lucky girl?! lol!

    much luv~
    shadowed


  • Inuyasha
    January 26, 2006
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    thanks!

    Thankyou! *Inuyasha

  • Dixie
    January 26, 2006
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    great

    beautiful and perfectly formed


  • Inuyasha
    January 10, 2006
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    Erm, thancks!

    Inuyasha

  • Sam Tucker
    January 10, 2006
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    that is good

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