without warning
you're back again
sneaking in
where you don't belong
making my safe places
scary
it's been ages
why are you still here?
get the fuck out of my life
get the fuck out of my head
i don't want you here
i never wanted you
why are you still here?
haven't you done enough damage?
oh, yeah
you wouldn't listen then
why would you listen now?
Author notes
yeah it's shit, but i had to get it out
Written January 10th, 2006
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- darkest emotion by dancing darkness.
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~Kate -
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ummm...I enjoyed the title, but I thought the way you were expressing yourself was kind of weak, but hey that is only my opionion, I really didnt feel anything, to me it was kind of bland, but good try, I am just being honest, sorry if it offeneds you
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I like this, becuase it's wry and not overly dramatic. "making safe places scary" I loved that line; it's probaly my worst ever fear. Good write!
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