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Buy me

Buy me out with flowers
rose petals taped to dandilion stems
the value of an angel without it's wings
or curisve print on a stained page

my love for you is like a waterfall
and yours a broken faucet
false words linger on your lips
and on my mind

your shattered mirror
shows me hidden angles
and I wonder
who you really are

buy me out with melted ice cream
dull knives
broken glass
words without meaning

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Written January 10th, 2006

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  • StarWarsJunkee
    January 23, 2006
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    I'll but you!!
    how much??


  • bloodislikewine
    January 15, 2006
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    Chelsea!
    AWWW. I love it. It's pretty. And I understand what you mean, through these words and from actually seeing how Robbie was. I'm glad he has finally realized what you want and he's giving it to you.
    Beautiful poem, and I just want you to know you are beautiful to me, too. I want everything to go well for you.
    I miss you. And I love you.
    ~♥ Natasha

  • StarWarsJunkee
    January 12, 2006
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    I have those problems too! well I hop ethat you discover the beauty, and wonderfully great person that you truly are!!
    ~Sarah

  • sagacious demise
    January 11, 2006
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    no, I'm perfectly happy with Robbie....I'm just like out to get myself or something, I don't know...I have it stuck in my head that I mean nothing to him, despite anything he says or does. This is more of a insecure problem I have....


  • Osiris Ra
    January 10, 2006
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    Nothing much I can say that hasn't been said before, but your writing is well-crafted regardless of the subject matter.

  • Saint Chaos
    January 10, 2006
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    well misses chelsea this is quite the interesting peice. You seem to be having troubles with your relationship. Im sorry for this and i hope that everything either gets better or you get happier with it

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