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Acrostic *Raspberry*

Acrostic Raspberry

Raspbery Pixie flies from old India to Paris, France.
As gossamer lavender wings carry love's first glance,
She spies a young man walking down upon golden sands
Pushing handsome to feel an oasis very close at hand.
But, her voice pure to human ears hears is wind unsure.
Even as she reveals magic riches sure, it is his lure.
Right as he chases what handsome believes jeweled lights
Reflecting only sweet water to save his life that night.
Yes as handome reflects, she collects his love contrite.

by Iohagh

Author notes

Welcome to our Pixieland
to hold Pixies hands
while dancing with elan
loving sons of Pan.
Written January 10th, 2006

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  • raspberry Greeters member
    January 10, 2006
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    Dear Iohagh.. Why on earth would I change it.. ? I just love this soo much. I adore my first day here in this new Pixie Land. I am honored.. glad to be a part of it Love u all and Thanks a ton for this awesome acrostic.


  • Iohagh
    January 10, 2006
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    I added you to this so you may change it if you like and also you get Pixie dust every time someone comments. Pixies love the world.