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fate

fate makes things turn out OK, it just takes a while.
fate makes bad things happen, but good things happen too.

There needs to be a balance between the two, good and bad.
If you are good and lead a happy life when something bad happens it is super bad.

but its OK.
everything happens for a reason.

that's called destiny
and fate.

Who knows why awesome people die in wars?
Who knows why wonderful sisters start being distant?

It is how things were meant to be.
but it won't always be like that.

Some day everything will be happy.
because God wants us to learn from bad stuff.

That is why he lets it happen.
People can cause war because of free will.

it is what we choose to do with our freedom
that gets us in trouble.

So we learn from our falls.
that's how we grow.

God wants us to learn how to handle hard things
so we can sympathise with each other better.

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Written January 10th, 2006

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  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    January 27, 2006
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    this is another really good poem from you--and very honest and teaching


  • HeavenScent4U
    January 21, 2006
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    You simply stated some universal truths (or what should be) here. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with us.

    Thanks for entering our contest and Good Luck. Be Well and Be Blessed


  • Sensual Sapphire
    January 20, 2006
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    Something that needs to be shared with the world. You used simple ideas and words to explain your thoughts and beliefs. Simple messages are the easiest to learn from. Well done and good luck in the contest.


  • Puppydog gold member
    January 11, 2006
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    TRULY BEAUTIFUL!

    I like this outlook, You have made me a believer with this beautiful poem