Lilo is just like me.
we are both orphans,
we both live with our sister
and we both have a silly billy pet!
We both dance a lot
neither of us has friends
other than our pets
we both see social services.
I wish I was more like Lilo.
She is brave,
and funny,
and smarter than I am.
Lilo is also more pretty than I am
but Mommy use to say I was like
a china doll, pretty and fragile.
We both miss our parents.
we both take lots of pictures.
But Lilo has alien friends
I don't have any friends
except my doggy Nanna
Author notes
you should make a conetst for orphans, or anyone who has been away from their parents for a while. There are so many of us out there.
Written January 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- For Ages 12 and Under ONLY --- Silly themes, Books, Movies and Fantasy by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended January 19, 2006, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a great poem! It was really sad. I love it!
MEOW!
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are you sure you are only eight? you write too good to be eight. i think i need lessons from you.
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This is a wonderful poem, it brought a tear to my eye. I can't imagine what it's like to be an orphan, but I do live far away from my mom and dad in the city of Prague over 5,000 km from home. I think that you must be a very strong and beautiful person.
Wade -
I like this piece really good job!
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Hey, this is really well done. I haven't seen Lilo and Stitch yet, I'll have to check it out
Fantastic job on this piece.
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This poem is great too. I love Lilo and Stitch and I am 20 lol but hey they say laughter keeps the heart young so...maybe that is not so bad. Great poem
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