I have a dog who's the best
she is old so she often has to rest
she is loving and tame
Nanna is her name
she is better than all the rest.
I have an old dog from the pound
she is a mix of terrier and hound.
She eats my icky food
and is never rude
she is nice to have around.
My dog is the best you will meet
she is charming and cute and sweet.
She likes to play chase
and she always beats me in a race
she is energetic and keeps you on your feet.
I have had her as long as I have been alive
she still has zing and drive.
She will play all day
and when I am away
she gets as crazy as a full bee hive.
Author notes
this is for my dog Nanna. She really is a great good super dog. I have added a couple more stanzas
Written January 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Favorite Animals(children-10-15 yrs of age) by misticmoonlite.
400 points, ended January 29, 2006, 9 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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lol, not on your life would I trade my dog! :-D
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she is a mix of terrier and hound.
She eats my icky food
and is never rude
she is nice to have around.
sounds like you have the best dog ever--wanna trade -
I like your poem I think I'de even like your dog.
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I really like this poem about your dog.. I have 2 of my own,
they are a loving animal, you have such a great love for her,I wish you more years with her, kisses from them are so appreciated, you take care and be well my young friend..Linda -
This is a cute little poem. I like the rhythm and flow. It's nicely written!! The only thing I would suggest is that you put punctuation marks wherever you take a breath
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Excellent work!!!
lmcrubberduckie, Congratulations on winning the silver here and I like the idea of using the double limerick. I don't know why you think you are not a good poet. You have so much potential. You write very well for a child of only 8 years.
Best wishes for both you and Nanna, she sounds like a wonderful dog and just a reminder, dogs love unconditionally so she will always love you. Keep her well and you do the same.
You sound like you have a very loving heart and that you write from there. Writes from the heart are always the best.
Best wishes and thank you so much for sharing this awesome piece with all of us. Congratulations to you again. Love and blessings for you, today and always.
Joyce
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it's in lymeric form
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wow beautiful poem.I love the way you rhyme and i think you are a great writer. Thanks for entering this cute poem and good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful, i can tell you love your dog.
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