fat
cat
on mat
playing with hat
sure is fat!
Ugg!
Bug
on rug!
Wants a hug!
UGG!
dog
on log
with hog
in bog.
Author notes
this is my first poem on this sight. What do you think? Is it good?
Written January 10th, 2006
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i love animals, that is all I can say as my inspiration, sorry I couldn't say more.
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what inspired me? I love animals, and it just came to me... I don't know what inspired me, I just wrote what came to me.
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weird.. it is very WEIRD~!!! and very funny too!!
Excellent rhyming...
i liked it and enjoyed read it too!!!
as Stix said "what inspired you?" lol.. that'll be hard to answer
Keep on writing, this was fun to read
Nooni -
well ... im Gob Smacked!!
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LOL, what inspired you?
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Oh, I forgot - did you explain that aside from being a swamp, a bog is also a coloquialism for a toilet? (That could put a whole new spin on this, hee hee).
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Wierd - no, cute as heck - Yes!! I want to share this one with my son, I'm sure it will make him laugh. As a Scot living in the US, I have to brag - I knew what a bog was, ha ha!!
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I have never known that. To us Americans it is just a swamp. Thanks for teaching me a new use of a fun word!
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poor dog
not a place one would like ot be stuck with a hog
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aww!
aww! thats so cute! i love cats so much! i have three! haha, that was so cute, keep it up!
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Definitely a change from my usual read and write. But interesting all the same...it was unique on a Dr. Suess kind of level, but i liked it, lol.
Green eggs and ham is old news..Imcrubberduckie's in the house, lol
Keep up the random work. It works!
~Angel Eyes~ -
fat
cat
on mat
playing with hat
sure is fat!
lol...yeah, I guess everyone's said everything I wanted to say too...lol. Yes, this was very cute and very random...lol. But I must admit that there is nothing as adorable as cats...especially FAT ones! It's nice to stumble on a Dr. Suess piece so late at night, so thanks for the smile and give that dog a pat on the head for me.
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silly
Splendid nonsense poem, and for your first try, I think it deserves an applause, so, here you are, have the clap!
Robin.
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fantastic!
so fun and cute and sweet
Glad to see some not so serious poems out there!!!
I can tell you had fun writing this one!!!!
Keep it up!!!
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Neat and epigrammatic... But do remember that "bog" (at least in UK usage) is also one of the many terms for "the smallest room in the house" - particularly the sort which are not actually IN the house - but are in a primitive shed outside!
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lovely poem! I love the rimes!! Well done! Maybe you should putted also in the category "humor"!!
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this is so wonderful. i think dr seuss better watch out, looks like he might have some competition from you. are you sure you are only eight--you have perfect rhythm through this entire poem.
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Adorable
Awwww...adorable!!! I like the spare style, gets right down to the meat of the subject. Reminds me a little of Dr. Suess
I especially liked the part about the bug...UGG! Keep writing
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interesting!
I am really not sure what to make of this write?...it seems a bit clipped...more like haiku due to the minimalistic flavour of the piece!...however you certainly managed to capture the essence of what you were trying to put across in relation to the category chosen!...interesting! -
Cute!
I really liked this, complete with the background that you selected. I love cats. Skinny or fat, doesn't matter.
But your poem is cute, and simplistic. Nice change of pass around here. I was about your age when I started to write. Good luck to you in the contest.
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I give it a 7.9
hmm, usually like in depth stuff, but this was strangely apealling to me. Good fun read. Excellent job. You won the admiration of a usually harshly opinionated poet. -
Cool
How adorable! Nice little happy poem.
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good poem
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Excellent!
I like it, it's fun and funny and cool. I'd like to show it to Annie Franck and Little G, my daughter and son. -
I never thought of being a comedian before, what is a comedian? Mabye my sister knows...
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hahaha this is classic it is so funny. You could be comedian I'll hand you that another great job I hope to see a lot more poems by you and if you want you could be AP daughter I would love to have ya as a part of my AP family
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lol i like it, it is very......umm...playful? i hope that comment suits! <3
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