Daddy, do you miss me while you're gone?
Is that why you're always away for so long?
Do you want to hold me when I'm sad?
Is that why you get mad when I cry?
Do you still love me when I do something wrong?
Is that why your eyes always turn so red when you yell?
Daddy, I don't know what to say
But you need to tell me that it'll be okay.
Because I'm growing up and I no longer hide
like the little girl inside.
Author notes
Look at it from a little girl's point of view.
Written January 10th, 2006
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yes very creative, not only putting a point across but making it interesting to read in the process....good work in writing this piece i hope that in the future i will read more of your fine work.!
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very good
very sad very good write with a lot of emotion and meaning keep up the good work -
thats so sad n hurting ! a very nice piece indeed ! i really am inspired to care for ma dad lolz! wat if he leaves me ! a very apprecaive work
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mmm very sad but also short and sweet with alot of meaning....
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That's so sad. A father should never forget his love for his little girl. It makes me want to cry. ^_^; But's it's so... what's the word? It just captured me and I can't just read it without leaving a comment behind to remind myself of the effect it had on me.
Kellogs
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This is really sad and beautiful. I like it.
~Amanda~
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This is a great piece.
Shahrzad
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