How do you know
How do you know, if your really worthy?
How do you know-- if you haven't gone too far?
They say he forgives all, no matter what you've done.
Just ask and you receive, if you're honest in your heart.
The worst of all sins, Satan's- got ahold on me---
Need him to let go, Lord- I'm down on my knees -----
How do you know, if your really worthy?
How do you know-- if you haven't gone too far?
No matter--what you've done? Will he forgive
-- even ME!?
What do i say? How do i plea?
God i need a hand- to guide me ------
Tell me the way-- I'm begging you please,
I don't wanna hate myself- any more--
Can you forgive, can you love-- someone like me----?
OOH- OHH , OOH- OHH
How can i know, If I'm really worthy?
How can i know- if i haven't gone to far?
What do i say, how do i plea--
Help me turn away from sin --
Lord - I'm down on my knees -
OOH-ohh , OOH-Ohh
Faith will guide me, Honest prayer is my plea--
The cross says I'm worthy-
He gave his life for every one--
Even some - one - just like- me !-----
Author notes
I got inspired tonight, My nephews band and a friend were jamming- so i started writing. Hope you like it.
Tonight we'll fly away so high! I guess it would be - choice
# 1-. It just makes me feel.......
Written January 10th, 2006
A contest entry
- Music speaks to the soul. Do you agree?, write about it for me. by classical beauty.
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thank you...
Art work? wow* Thank you very much....
not sure how to change some of it,
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It's personal. Personal writes are wonderful. Without a personal appeal, it's just a poem. With a personal feel, it's artwork. Emotions are power. Some of the lines end awkwardly. You might want to look at that. In general, though, it is very good
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Very good! I hear a rock rhythm for that! God's forgiveness is amazing! Even when we feel like we don't deserve such love!!!
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Excellent
Very inspiring. Good luck in the contest.
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ireally like this poem. i love the way your words flow, and i love how you incorporate your feelings deep into the poem. i understand how you feel here, thats the whole reason i instated the contest really, to see if others suffered as i have... anyways best of luck in my contest, and ii f you ever need someone to talk to the doors always open.. God Bless
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Thank you for the comments , i really appreciate it ; and im glad you enjoy it.
God bless you all! -
I like the honesty and sincerity of this prayer/song very much. With them and a little faith we can accept the salvation offered to us by God.
Frightendove -
great message
veary cool message, it is eazy to feel veary unworthy and the true is you are not, but about being worthy its about believeing what he said is true.. to know you do and this will make for a great song,,
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