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Acrostic *Thinking Buddy*

Acrostic Thinking Buddy

Thinking Buddy, a Pixie Tender Heart
Has love drawing butterflies to parks
In her voice sweet words that thrill
Never has she lost her lovely will
Kissing all things which fly
In her presence they never die.
No flutterbys ever commit suicide.
Goodness from insides she cannot hide.

But as her sweet friends feel pain
Under regrets her white tears rain
Down from the sky into my heart
Deeper than mere words can impart
You I implore use loves white arts.

by Iohagh

Author notes

Moonling chat with her
for all she infers
and do not defer
all harm please deter.
Written January 9th, 2006

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  • April 19, 2006
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    you do these so very well. I just love them!!!!

    you make me smile every time i read one!

    Smoosh!

  • heart on sleeve
    January 10, 2006
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    beautiful picture and the poem was also that of beauty showing a love and sereene feel to it lol abigailxx


  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    thanks for that and Pixies rock and love the world. She's Pixielicioius my Iohagh's Magical Pixie, IMP, Princess. Ciao.


  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    I put your name on collaboration with this poem so that you get Pixie dust any time it gets reviewed.

  • Smexi Sarge
    January 9, 2006
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    Excellent

    It is a good poem and you shoulc be proud u go into alot of detail which i like to fell wat u fell.

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