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Leaving

When it's time to pull myself from your arms
At the end of our time spent together
It's so much harder every time I go
To keep myself from crying bitter tears
I don't know when I'll see you again
My love, My everything, My dearest
The inspiration for the life I live
I'll kiss you again before I leave
Lay my head on your chest to feel your heartbeat
Praying it beats for me and my return

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Written January 9th, 2006

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  • poetmaster32
    January 18, 2006
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    its hard to leave someone you really care for. love is so powerful everyone should be able to feel that feeling. good job, keep it up. peace.


  • Jraehazy
    January 18, 2006
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    Awww this is so sad. I am really glad you wrote it though because it sounds like the poem i wish this guy i like wrote for me in this dream i had. Thanks for creating this poem, it really went straight to my heart like a sword. Respects to the pen.
    Love Jordan