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Acrostic *Sylvyrwyng*

Acrostic Sylvyrwyng

Slyvrwyng a Pixie of the pond plopping under the rising morning sun.
Yes all Pan's handsome Elves run and dance before her laughter spun.
Love is her purpose though Queen Maab has now become a star.
Verily my Pixie summons imps to run splashing in dew drops afar.
Yonder dale is mined for Pixie dust magically glowing as little fires
Roar as she passes while music Elf inspired leaps from their lyres
Where she rises and glows from magic loam for her beloveds desires.
Never shall her heart which beats with Pan's ever in eternity expire.
Graciously my Pixie princess rises to greet the dreams of man entire.

by Iohagh

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Pixies love the world and join us in a safe place online for whimsy and romance sublime.
Written January 9th, 2006

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  • Seaquince
    May 1, 2006
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    it seems you please many with ur work


  • Iohagh
    January 17, 2006
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    I wrote one for each Pixie which gets confusing when the young ones change their names.


  • grannyeri gold member
    January 17, 2006
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    How wonderfully you pen these acrostics - any idea how many you have written? You seem to get in deeper to write about each person, knowing some of their specail qualities than make these poem so much more meaningful.

  • Iohagh
    January 10, 2006
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    You may make any changes you want.


  • Sylvyrwyng gold member
    January 10, 2006
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    Thank you my darling sweetling. Many pixie blessings upon you and this wonderful court that you live within. This anacrostic is a form I have yet to use in my work but I am fast thinking of expanding into this just for fun. You have given me a new view of myself from your eyes and I have to say that I like what you see. So thank you much for the boost that you have given to my spirits as they have been very low this past week. Love and hugs to my pixie spirit sister.


  • Iohagh
    January 10, 2006
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    I've read a lot of her poems and let me say her heart is as big as all outdoors. People can hide a lot about themselves but a fat heart even shows when your hurt. That is why she is so, well, Pixielicious. LOL. We love the world. Ciao.

  • heart on sleeve
    January 10, 2006
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    this Pixie must have much dust for many men she is so pleasing to the eye and yet still her heart full of good and love lol abigailxx


  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    I added your name so you can get Pixie dust each time this is reviewed and you may change it as what is best for you.

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