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Acrostic *Silver* *Sionnach* & *Elf* *Dantes* *Inferno*

Acrostic Silver Sionnach & Elf Dantes Inferno

Silver Sionnach Pixie of twilight light
Is wooed and won by her elf each night
Loving everything that Elf might
Verily of this love I write
Enter Dantes Inferno, an elf, polite
Replete he is a handsome sight.

She on the other hand
Is susceptible to Pixieland
On the wings of dragonflies and
Not afraid of any man,
Nuptuals they both plan
Amidst their great elan.
Can anyone not understand
How heart and light expand.

&

Elf lords did contemplate
Love as their ultimate fates
For tender hearts cannot wait.

Dantes Inferno named for heat
Always hot beneath his feet
Never did his patience keep
To delay her dreams from sleep
Every elf witnessed their kiss, peep
She didn't care, her bliss complete.

In the glen, elves and Pixies dance
Night into dawn with stolen glance
For Elfin heart one precious chance
Enjoining Pixie sweet lovely romance.
Right then, the moon arising askance
Nearing its most highest stance
Openning a chariot highway to France.

by Iohagh

Author notes

Pixie Love conquers all. Have Draven join as an elf please. Love you both with my Irish heart.
Written January 9th, 2006

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  • Sonja
    January 10, 2006
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    Your wings are always so strong
    to fly over the clouds of love
    Yor beauty soul there belong.
    Your wings are full of magic dust
    and poetry is like a lullabay,
    Love is not only a word, it is a must.
    Enjoy your life, and fly, pixie, fly,
    When I saw this morning early sun hue
    I knew that some of it's golden rays
    will allways shine only for you.
    From time to time you need a rest too
    Colect your magic force for a new day
    continue your mission, we all love you.

    ~Sonja~


  • Iohagh
    January 10, 2006
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    You are right and I am in shreds but since my boyfriend left what else do I have to do on Monday night when my bar is closed. The logic behind that is really tragic when you think about it. Love you Grannie, My Empress of Tender Hearts. Ciao. Pixies love the world.

  • Iohagh
    January 10, 2006
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    I am so beat. I am glad you went to France. If you guys laughed, then it is worth it. Pixies love the world and I left a message with the management to send Draven, Dantes Inferno, the AP link unless you kept yours or saved it. If not, take care and Liadan be pixielicious for Draven. LOL. Ciao.

  • Silver Sionnach
    January 9, 2006
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    This made me smile as I have not smiled in a long while. Beautifully worded...the rhymes flowing beautifully. Thank you my pixie sister...actually, our honeymoon was in France.
    ~Liadan


  • sjgaither
    January 9, 2006
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    Lovely and amazing your words!!!! I really enjoy your acrostics!!!!


  • crystaldust gold member
    January 9, 2006
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    crystaldust 10-01-06 02:10
    This is what happens when I can't sleep, lovely Iohagh. I get to read your poems and acrostics hot off the press. Great. I hope you're not wearing yourself to a shred with all this writing and commenting. Every Pixie needs to conserve a centre of strength to herself. So, be careful, will you? And sleep well when you do get to bed. Love, love, love, from Pixiegram


  • Diablosanjil
    January 9, 2006
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    Very nice piece I enjoyed it immensely. the flow was beautiful.

  • Xa wilted roseX
    January 9, 2006
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    this is so flow-y and....

    I guess the word is soft.

    beautiful


  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    I added your names so that you may get angel dust whenever some reads this and you may change it as you like.

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