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Proof

Proof of your lust adorns my neck
Sticky… like the juice from a tart
The seed you so eagerly spilt is a choker
Somehow… binding my heart.

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Short and ah... sweet?
Written August 14th, 2002

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  • silversong
    September 8, 2003
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    Sometimes I wonder about the whole cum-necklace . . . it sounds so gross to me, but then I think it can be really sweet, to have someone love you or be in love with you for the moment enough to experience that . . . thanks for your comment on "Let Go", sorry that I didn't comment back sooner, but I didn't have a computer for awhile. It meant a lot to me, anyway. As short as this poem is, I really liked it. Good luck in this contest