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Acrostic *Sweetanjil*

Acrostic Sweetanjil



Sweetanjil is a Pixie heart
Whose dark nights were caught
Every scream in nightmare dreams
Entered her soul through means
Tantamount to theft of light
And yet my Pixies shines so bright.
Never will she ever allow
Justice to not prevail.
I know your soul and your control
Loves nothing less than make others whole.

By Iohagh

Janet McCall

Author notes

Are you my twin
down beneath your skin
feeling you never win
despite fighting past sins.


Written January 9th, 2006

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  • JohnnyD gold member
    July 31, 2006
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    sweetness and light

    I am actually not certain 'how' i wound up here but as usual it was most nice. If love were a train, you'd be the locamotive.


  • Sonja
    January 10, 2006
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    Iohagh, you have a heart big like a very special train and everybody is going to the same destination - love. From time to time this train must stop to leave enter everybody who need Pixies help. In my eyes, you are not only pixie, and today I give you a medal named Mother love.
    ~Sonja~


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    January 9, 2006
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    It is so beautiful and I am eternally greatful. And thru the light of the pixies/fairies I shall find my strength and courage to go on each and every day, to see the beauty in everything


  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    Sweetanjil, welcome to Pixieland and your name is added to this collaboration so each comment is like Pixie dust. Love.