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The Moment

the first moment i looked
into your sparkling eyes
and beautiful smile
it made me feel warm
and gushy inside
i got lost in your eyes
like a captain at sea
when you gaze back at me
i feel wanted and so free
like two ships slowly
moving closer together
i will kiss your lips
as soft as a feather
after i enjoy your sweet bliss
maybe i could give you
a very passionate kiss
and when we are done
our journey together
has just begun


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Written January 9th, 2006

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