Reliving the old feelings
Despising the new
Memories of laughter & mirth
Pain is new
Smiles replaced with tears
Tears replaced with blood
Blood spills from my wounds
Like an over-filled fountain
Self-Inflicted
But Inflicted by you
No one understands
Those wounds are secret
Hidden away in the recesses of my mind
The subconscious mind pictures them
The pain
The misunderstanding
And it tries to relive the old feelings
What did you think
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AWSOME
I have 2 words wow and awsome if I could whistle I would lol
ne way Beautiful work. I loved the expression and feeling you put into your lines, I promise to read more of your writes.
by the way good luck on your wedding. I hope it starts and ends well (I mean in like 50 or 100 years) well like I said awsome and good luck ~Rachel~ -
Thanks for the comments Feather! I appreciate everyone who comments on my work.
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i love this poem,i love your feeling you have shared,i love the depth your poem has,i love the whole thing it is just amazing great write.
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Thanks for your comments guys!
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i liked it alot it had such feeking i hope your ex dies lol but u know what i mean i liked the way it was written and i love poems that express true feelings i hope to see more of your work maybe when you have a chance you can check mine out too ight ttyl
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