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My Secret In Silence

You came into my life
Quietly, simply, placidly
And  my words stood still....

I couldnt express in words
or even in simple gestures
The secret I kept in my heart....

So I loved in silence,
Admired you from a distance,
Dreamt of you from afar....

I wanted to say I love you....
I wanted to say I care....
But cowardly, maybe, you'll only laugh
at me....

In silence then I will love you....
In silence then I will care....

Author notes

I liked someone but they didnt care so i didnt waist my time on him.
Written January 9th, 2006

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  • Hole In The Heart
    January 26, 2006
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    Perfect 10

    awesome... great character and coice of words... id give it a 1-0!


  • Precious jewel
    January 18, 2006
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    excellent

    who is this about tiffany? i was just wondering... its really good.


  • I Am The Nightmare
    January 10, 2006
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    sad but loveing and meanifull great write keep it up!


  • crystallynnbradford
    January 9, 2006
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    sad, depression, yet full of love and it's true meaning-to be there forever. I liked this poem and i hope you keep writing. i think that this poem is an award winner, maybe you should enter it in a contest sometime.