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My Advice: Be Nothing



Writing many words - waving, making, graphing;
I proclaimed my name – extensive name;
I felt so wise and certainly special,
and expected for many praises.

And I received, back to me…
        …just words,
Exactly what I offered!
And nothing else…

The worst happened,
when to my house I returned,
just to find my wife in  my bed,
sleeping with my Book embraced.

I was unable to blame – or accuse –
for that book had my name – after all –
I should feel pride – envy even –
but no. Nothing.

That was when I understood.
My best creation:
Nothing.
So,  nothing I became.

Nothing for my wife’s embrace.
Nothing for the public praise.
Nothing that allowed me to fragment
Small and unnumbered, dismissed…

Everything I could finally be.  

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Written January 8th, 2006

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  • Runawaytrain
    January 24, 2006
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    The emptiness of writing. I like it. Thanks for entering.


  • Vernal Bloom
    January 16, 2006
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    ahsant

    The title attracted my attention: “Be nothing”
    As I know you are single so this poem is surely an imaginary one!You put feeling in part part of your poem and I do like it because it makes your poetry alive.
    Thanks for sharing this with us

    ~Massy~