I love you....three
little words I never thought
I would say. Love, an emotion I didn't
think I would ever come to know. Then you
came into my life and changed all that. You somehow
were able to shatter my walls. You made me smile without
even trying. You melted my ice shielded heart and aroused my
senses. You've done what I thought was impossible. My soul has
been awoken by your seductively tender touch. For so long I denied,
for you, what I felt. Much of the time I spoke, hiding, hoping and
praying you would not see the love for you that was residing in me. In
denial, to myself and my heart, I lived. The pain of loving you in secret
has become too much for me to bear. My heart has won the battle and
my every emotion, I spill from pen to paper. Never before have I worn
my heart on my sleeve. This night I remove its veils and show you
the truth of my deepest desires. From the depths of my heart
and soul my words flow effortlessly forth to show you all
that you've done to me. Before you I have fallen
victim to love and upon my knees, to you
my love, my mind, my body, my soul
and my heart I completely
surrender.
Author notes
DefinitiveFreak ~ A Loving Word and Stray
Rose Dark Thorn ~ Lonely Master and Broken Vow
SweetSilverNinja ~ How Do I Describe You and All Alone
Written January 8th, 2006
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awww this is so relateable on so many levels. The past has a way to come into the present and make us hide our vulnerability to another. Yet true strength is to make oneself vulnerable this is a lovely and insightful read into you
love and light
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Thank you for another great entry
Good luck
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Thank you my dear Kain.
I am so pleased you enjoyed this piece and my work.
I simply write what I feel. No more and no less
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How many times have you captivated me with your words? How many times have you brought me to my knees in awesome wonder? How many times will your works bring my senses to new heights of euphoric pleasure? Moon goddess, you truly are a wonder.. I surrender to your will..
Yours in tandem,
Kain
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wow this is beautiful. i love how you said my every emotion i spill from pen to paper. and how you talk about youve never loved like this. i can feel the emotion. great write. good luck in the contest!
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A journey into the depths of the mind's mysteries. The word surrender is such an erotic word. I like the colourings of its meanings. I think you would write excellent erotica. Maria
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This is a very pretty piece. I really enjoyed reading this. It was set in such a tone of vulnerability and emotion. I really liked this. Great write. Hope you do well in the contest. - cgirl0410
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Beautiful and powerful. I could feel the intensity of the emotions poured out in this poem. Really caught my attention and held me through the entire piece until the veil is lifted. Nice job.
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very good job on this
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Awesome awesome awesome! I wish I could write something not only so visually interesting and beautiful, but with words that flow with so much love and honesty. I loved it very much. Thank you for sharing!
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Amazing piece. Full of energy and passion and love. This is a very genuine piece and chock full of emotion. Great job. I love it. I must share this with my husband.
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Amazing form used for this verse - great shape in photo too! Exquisite write.
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I thank you much my dear lady.
I fought hard to deny what truth lies within me only because I spent so much time building walls around my heart to keep from being shattered once again. Somehow he made it through, still not sure how but he did. Do I regret it? Not one bit
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And why not? If we feel it, go for it! We should not hold it in us. If we fall in love, say it and everything else will smoothly glides like a butterfly in the air. A well written poem, beautiful manifestation of love and the attainment of the big O! Reaching the pinnacle of love is the fulfilment of one’s soul!
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Ummm... Sis? You are ummm stealing my heart away by your words. This poem is breathtaking and gorgeous. I can only pray and work towards this love. whew... powerful and very vulnerable.
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You give to me your heart and your everything leaving nothing save the void from which you came and even that sucks into it my heart for you are like a supernova of emotion that collapsed in upon itself and became first a black hole and then a time warp into the heart of Paradise. That is how I felt and I know it is out there but you give me hope to love again which now seems lost in my own black hole. Pixie auntie, your rock my block. Love the world. Darling Pixielicious. Ciao.
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WOW!,
This is very good, deep, sensual with a with a wonderful flow, rhythm and awsome presentation. The imagery was excellent really gave the poem some subtance and keep it intresting. Excellent work! -
Awww thank you much sis
Hope you are doing well
My prayers and thoughts are with you always
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passionate~
Sweet tender sensual and beautiful sis
I love this...and your beautiful loving soul shows in this poem
Passionate and loving...best of luck in the contest
Love n hugs
Susan~~~
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Thanks Sis, so glad you liked this piece.
It was straight from the heart and all true
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Thank you my sister
I am glad you liked this piece.
Every word of it is 100% truth
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You know how to spill your heart all over the room. Wow..and with such tender and vulnerable passion. He's a very lucky man, sis. I loved it..and totally understand it. Love, Sid
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Wowee!!! You rock, sister girl! This is an awesome piece of love and passion...wow! I wish you much luck in the contest; this kicks
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I really like the ouline of the poem. This picture kind of scared me at first, I didn't realize she was sitting on her knees, I thought she was missing the bottom half of her legs, but upon closer inspection they were indeed under her. As for the poem it definitly conveys thoughts of lvoe and passion. I wish you the best of luck in your contest.
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OMG!!! This poem...is the best poem I've read in I don't know how long. The words were so beautiful as well as your structure. The theme here is so beautiful. Most girls would kill for a guy to write something like that for her. I can't say enough about this poem. BRAVA!
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