she wonders why they say she's beautiful,
but no one asks her out.
she's tired of being so doubtful,
because things never work out.
when she cries, she cries alone.
when she dies, she'll die alone.
what's the point of trying?
pretty, unhated.
need to be sedated.
never want to hurt her.
never want to love her.
never want her, never want her...
she believes in love,
and for it she would die.
she wishes for some
but fails when she tries.
life is love, but no one comes to her.
thoughts abouve, say life without love is not worth living for.
what's the point of breathing?
pretty, unhated.
need to be sedated.
never want to hurt her.
never want to love her.
no one wants her, no one wants her.
she just feels like screaming.
she just feels like crying.
she won't have love : that's how it's seeming.
she just feels too much like dying.
pretty, unhated.
need to be sedated.
never want to hurt her.
never want to love her.
someone save her! someone save her!
she always keeps on giving, never to be receiving.
she always keeps on living, wondering why she's still believing.
while she lives, she lives alone.
while she gives, she gives alone.
what's the point of believing?
pretty, unhated.
need to be sedated.
never want to hurt her.
never want to love her.
no one favours, no one favours.
if i'm so pretty, why does no one love me?
Author notes
this is for my friend. she's going through a hard time right now, and i think this song really shows how she feels. she's the one in the picture.
Written January 8th, 2006
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I love it however I saw no picture, and girls remember you do not have to have a man in your life to be happy. Sometimes being alone and not constantly having a guy up your rump is just as good if not better then having a partner... Be confident and be happy have patience when it is meant to happen it will happen!!!
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This is an amazing piece. So sad but so powerful. Love isn't life, it just helps. Living without love does suck, and can make life seem almost useless but there is always hope. I can relate to that. But don't give up hope on love or on life, you're still young with plenty on time left.
-Larry -
You love the spirit not the physical being on the outside. Pretty is as pretty does. Great write.
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Wow this is extrmely good! You're such a talented writer! Wow... just amazing... it's all just so beautiful and sad... this piece is so good! You did terrificly!
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you are speaking on the behalf of many many beautiful girls.
the truth is, no body wants perfection, and beauty is so often taken for perfection. jealousy, resentment, hey jealousy.
i like the way its written, even though its not my usual style.
you expressed yourself fairly well.
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yeah i can relate to this one too, they tell me they wouldnt make me happy, or they dont want a relationship then they have a boyfriend the next week. you expressed these feelings well. good job.
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Wow... It feels like you stepped into my mind to find the words to write this poem... It's extremely wonderful, I loved it. You expressed everything I haven't been able to, yet, and you did it so well. Thanks for sharing this.
-Amanda -
Wow. . . Sounds JUST like my thoughts on myself. . Well sort of
. . Great job here in expressing thoughts and emotions. . I really liked this. . . You should definately put music behind it! The flow was beautiful, and the words were awesome. I'd totally love this song (with music ) 
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I thought this was pretty good. It's sad you feel that way though.
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It is really a great way to express the sentiments just making us stunning through and through.The subject here in this write have been presented with a great peculiarity of the expereicnces of the beautiful girl and making this work just a innocent and honest one .The beauty of this write lies in its concept which is really pressing the muse of the raders to think the matter from the point of the view of the poet too. The concept is just an original and the impact of the concept with the presentation too is very impressive too. The flow is very wonderful .I really appreciate this work.prabhudayal khattar
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This wonderful!! Its so surpriseing how one person can feel so alone and unloved all at once. I like the repeating, it gives it something extra. I also like the parts were you have pretty much kept the same thing but just changed the words. This is a really great read. I am really going to enjoy reading more of your work.
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Wow! This would be a pretty cool song! Could almost hear Garbage rocking out on this tune!!!! Sad lyrics but very meaningful...
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