You look at me as you love me,
you speak to me as though you hate me,
i don't understand,
I see it in your eyes.
i see through your lies,
you love me but you don't,
is it a question that you don't or is it that you won't.
Come on tell me the truth,
tell me while we have our youth,
please you are breaking me apart,
you are stabbing through my heart,
so i depart.
You are going to leave the world i know,
I'm right in front of you, hello.
So it before i leave,
do it before i go,
you say to me just a plain no,
no reason, you hurt me so low.
You told me you did,
i never knew you where such a kid.
I cant believe i fell for you,
know what i must do,
your beautiful on the outside,
but inside you are ugly.
Know i see this could never be,
you tore me apart know set me free.
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hmmm personel crap
Written January 8th, 2006
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WOW!!!!!!!! Love da write!!! Gonna miss u when you leave!!!!!
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thanks alot
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I like this a lot! great job!
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awsome
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very good, it's not crap at all, lol.......oh yea, and everyone else has pretty much stated what i would've siad soo....listen to them ^_^
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WOW!! amazing poem - not at all crap Hope who ever it is you've told them because sometimes people don't realise that they are hurting someone. Hope you're ok, if you need to talk anytime...
xxx
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thanks that means alot to me
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grand poem, i'm not gonna pry in your buisness cos i respect your privacy, love sucks and people are complicated, but i'm sure this person will come to their sense
xx grand poem dude
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Good poem, Who's it about?
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thanks for the comment
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wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow!wow! I can totally get where you're coming from because that sounded like you were saying exactly how I feel. That is so crazy! I really liked this.
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thanks very much for the comment.
fortune
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Pray that God change his or her heart. or that you find someone better. May God bless you. I love the poem
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