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Happy Valentine's Day Wish all your loved ones 'Happy Valentine's Day' with these warm-n-wonderful ecards. [ 24 cards ]


Love is nicer than puppies
I love my mom and that is why I love
My mother's heart is like a rose
Always open and loving

Love, I just love to talk about love

My mom loves me and I love her

She always gives me a beautiful smile 
and
always listens to me 
Just the way I want her to be


So now, I say thank you mother
For being so wonderful to me
I take this time
To say have a happy valentine

Author notes

I am 7 years old. I hope you like my poem.
Thanks for the applaud and wonderful words.
Written January 8th, 2006

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  • Keith Drew gold member
    August 10, 2007

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    Beautiful!

    Tears in my eyes as I read, there is nothing in this world so pure and real, then the love of a child.
    Well done lil cherry blossom in a tree full of love.
    Beautiful!


  • February 13, 2007

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    beautiful I think you are gonna be a wonderful poet just keep practicing. also I love you moms poems too I see where yours is coming from.


  • crimsonphaery
    October 7, 2006
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    Excellent

    Aww this is an absolutely beautiful poem!! I'm so impressed! Your mum must be great! Keep writing, you have so much talent!
    ~Jinx~


  • baawri
    September 29, 2006
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    Amazing

    I cant believe can poetic talents be inherited like that from mom to daughter.Very very congrats to you little gal and best wishes you will emerge as a great poet one day.


  • Whispering Winds
    September 25, 2006
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    This just has to be one of the sweetest poems from a child to her mother that I have ever read. You done a wonderful job sweetie, and I am sure your Mommy is so proud of this as she is proud of you.

    Much love,
    Angelic Love


  • Angelwatchingme
    September 24, 2006
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    WhaT an adorably cute poem, you write quite well!!!

  • sad-but-true
    April 13, 2006
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    This was well written from a tender heart of seven. I wish you well and keep writing as I am going to add you to my favs. Good luck darling. ~val~


  • drusilla36
    March 27, 2006
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    awww this is sooo amasing!!
    keep up the good work!
    Dru xxxxxx


  • San-d
    February 15, 2006
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    Beautiful poem about Mother. Hope you put this in a Valentines card for Mom. Great job dear!!
    Smiles your way >>>>>>>>> Sandy San-d


  • rosepoet
    February 15, 2006
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    Amazing !!!!!!!This poem is so beautiful.These words are so pure and stright from the heart.My Sweet little daughter million thanks for so much love in this poem. Your words means the world to me.
    I love you rose.
    Edited on Feb 15, 9:33 because ''.


  • B Chandler
    February 12, 2006
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    other than the typos, I am beyond speechlessness rhat you're only 7 years old and that you wrote this very deep and thought provoking piece and know that if you did not place in this contest, know that there will be a suprise for you nonetheless


  • Violet Moodswing Greeters member
    February 12, 2006
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    I am going to show you typo corrections that you need in your poem below my comment so make sure to edit any mistakes that you have. This is an absolutely beautiful poem. Your love for your mother is very clear and makes everyone think of the things that we love about our mothers. This is a very good poem. I hope you always keep writing because it looks to me like you have important things to say and a nice way of saying them.

    Love is nicer than puppies--add an r to the end of nice

    Love, I just love to talk about love--comma after the first --Love--

    My mom loves me and I love her--an s at the end of the first --love--

    She always gives me a beautiful smile--s at the end of --give--

    To say have a happy valentine--you spelled valentine --valantine--

    You did a very good job with your spelling in most of the poem and it was wonderful to read.

    Best of luck in the contest.


  • Kendall Campbell
    February 12, 2006
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    This was sweet, something I'm sure any mother would love to get on Valentine's Day. Just one thing, nice should be nicer in the first line. I have to agree with PrabhuDayal, this was great.
    Edited on Feb 12, 10:09 because 'typo'.

  • Niveche
    February 12, 2006
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    aaawe

    aaaaawe - made me call MY mom and tell her i love her - a really sweet poem and good flow and verse. keep writing

  • Cristea
    February 12, 2006
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    excellent

    Very good poem.I liked it.Good flow and
    deep feelings.i got nice imagery as
    "Love is nice than puppies
    I love my mom and that is why I love
    my mother's heart is like a rose
    Always open and loving
    " in your poem.


  • FirstScript
    February 12, 2006
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    beautiful work darling... keep it up.


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    February 12, 2006
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    Well it is just a great journey of the love through and through too.The thoughts which are presented here are just very melodious and very muscal in terms of its impact over the readers time and again.The essence of the write is just very deep and bringing the flavour of the universal pleasure of the life and that is the love nothing axcept the love.You have captured your sentiments very delicately and this is the beauty of this write ,,bravo..

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    January 8, 2006
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    Yes love is the best thing there is. And it's not only meant to be shared with our families, but everyone around us. Everyone we love and who loves us. You've expressed it well here. Keep up the good work.
    Brian

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