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An Artist Morning



It is an artist morning
soft light
on the horizon
the pink glow of dawn
highlighting the early clouds.

Distant mountains
washed
in a halo of mist.
And I sit here
  alone
understanding
more than I want to admit
wishing it was different.

But I have the morning
and the glory of it
and I have memories
to cherish.

And if the morning
comes again
I will rise
loving you
always
loving you.

Author notes

I wake loving and the sky opens up and allows me to.
Written May 21st, 2004

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  • Kinky Lil Devil
    January 8, 2006
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    another beautiful piece of work *Huggles* gorgeous


  • Passionate Desyre
    January 8, 2006
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    Very good poem.The imagery is great and you did a wonderful job writing this. Very beautiful piece and I really enjoyed it. Keep up the great writing

    Desyre

  • retard
    January 8, 2006
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    Sweet poem, including some truly beautiful lines, the vision of the morning. You have written it very well. And the last stanza is a perfect ending for the poem.