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Enjoy the ride!

 

 This is a story about my son and I, the day we took a 2400 mile trip
 and said good-bye. So open your mind of imagination and I will
confide, close your eye's, sit back, and enjoy the ride.


We packed up the bike one morning & went on our way,
we hoped to make it to Arizona by the end of the day.
Once in Arizona, we bedded down for the night,
so we could get going at break of day light.


 

Up the next morning, fresh and ready to go.
We stop to have breakfast and a cup of joe.


 


Next stop New Mexico, this son of mines pleased,
(with this smile that I carry)

from the "memories that I've seized"
We arrived in New Mexico, was pretty late.
 I needed some sleep but my son could hardly wait.

 Up the next morning past the Continental divide,

 he was "amazed and absolutely enjoying the ride"


 
 Next stop was the long horn state as most of you know.

 As we hit the Texas line we needed another cup of joe.

That night we went out and looked around,
 then headed back to our hotel and got bedded down.


Oklahoma was our next major stop,

 the home of "tornado's & plains"

I told my son"if you'll catch a nap,

 I'll pull over & let you take the Reign's"

 (He was jazzed!)

he said"Hey dad, were about half way

 we should make Oklahoma by the end of the day"
( I just looked at him & smiled)

 

 

 


It was one hell of a ride that far,
and I'd almost give anything to have
had a car. But the bike's what I had & in
the long run, I'm glad, Because now I have
memories locked in my mind, and now with my
boy gone "a treasure I've come to find"

Don't forget
 (God loves ya my Son)
   


Next stop was Arkansas, home of the Rebel flag
& the free. I don't know about my son, but I was
 needing to stop & take a nap against an old oak tree.


A quick nap and it was back on the road,
my son and I on that bike that we rode.
He was having a blast, I wish for him
 ( I could make these moments last)

 


The next stops Tennessee,

 so we could take some time just him and me.

 We got there the next day, & stopping in Memphis along the way.

So I took him to Beale street & B.B. Kings & he thought that was neat,

 that's where we decided to eat and take that heavy load

 off of our feet.


Next was Nashville, what a town, a place where I could
 really settle down. We took a drive past the Grand
 Ol'e Opry and at Nashville Palace we had a
 bite, then went to a hotel to get
 some sleep for the night.


Well, we were up bright and early and ready
 to be on our way. If we drove straight
 through, we'd be in North Carolina
 by the end of the day.


 We'd finally hit our destination point,

 North Carolina's where we wanted to be.

 This was where we would start our new life together,

 for just my son & me. That sign ahead,

it meant our trip is through. Then he said

"I want to thank you dad for this experience,

 just remember,  I LOVE YOU!"


We started our life over here. He got his diploma his first car,

 his first girlfriend. And now my son I'm gonna miss you,

 and I sure do remember that wonderful trip we had together
 and I wouldn't trade it for anything in this world my son,

 Adam died an early spring morning and he'll be missed

                                         so very much.  your pops

           


 11/10/1986 to 04/27/2005

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    January 19, 2008
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    It sounds like a trip every father & son should experience. I am sorry for his passing, I know the difficulties of accepting that loss. This is a great account of your memory. Thank you for sharing and entering the contest.


    whisper


  • romanticadventure
    May 28, 2007

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    Beautiful. Great i thought the poem was so good. you really did take me on your adventure (lol). im so sorry to hear about your son, it was hard to read this without getting very upset. The poem itself was excellent all around.


  • wolfcub
    March 1, 2007

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    Very unique format (if a bit hard to follow), and I like your focus on the good things in his life - it was very sweet and touching!
    Thankyou for entering and good luck in my contest.
    Katie

  • marrow
    February 4, 2007
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    gary--
    extremely emotional write that not only achieved what i was looking for, but also seemed to be a great personal write for you. thank you very, very much for entering this into my contest. God bless you,
    j


  • x Gemini x
    December 19, 2006

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    First, let me thank you for entering my contest.

    Second, i am sorry for your loss.

    Third:

    This poem was very touching. The flow and imagery was very well done. The poem is rather creative, and the format was uniquly your own. Though, i admit, it wasn't as focused on the fact that he has passed as it was how you felt when he was alive. But thats ok.

    Otherwise, this was good.


  • Carpe Noctem
    October 7, 2006
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    awesome

    This was so sweet and very sad. I'm glad you got to spend that time together, those memories shared are the most important things. He was lucky to have you. Thanks for entering, and best of luck!

  • zciindiiz
    August 29, 2006
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    That was a beautiful poem. I liked all the pictures ^_^ Good luck in the contest~

  • MinaMunoko
    August 13, 2006
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    Keep the memories alive. Never forget as I'm sure you won't. Such I heartfelt story turned poem. I enjoyed all the pictures and I'm glad you can express yourself in such a powerful way. Great job on this and I wish you the best of luck in my contest!!

    mina


  • Danna Hobart
    August 11, 2006
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    Oh, gosh, you have gone and made me cry. I am so sorry for your loss. No parent should ever have to hury a child. I wish I had something comforting ot say, but all I can say is that your words made me mourn for your son, even though I never knew him.

    My boys and I just took a road trip. We went from California through Nevada, Utah, Wyoming to Nebraska for a family reunion, then back home through Colorado, and New Mexico to Phoenix to see my sister's new baby. We made some memories too.


  • moment liver
    July 11, 2006
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    Beautiful story, very touching indeed. This was brilliant and thank you so very much for entering my contest!
    Keep writing from the heart!
    C Queen


  • secret angst
    June 27, 2006
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    i'm sorry that he died...but it sounds like an amazing trip. great write..


  • wings of an angel
    May 22, 2006
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    Gary this is a lovely tribute to your son one that you can carry on with you and have the good times that you can now cherish with you and your son the pictures were lovely taken on your trip together thank you for sharing, Keep smiling my friend


  • Endeavor gold member
    May 14, 2006
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    Very Good

    Heartbreaking, But you had your time together, so I am glad, Rick


  • getsbetter
    April 26, 2006
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    Thank you fight for the trophy and points, it was an honor to win. And I'm glad you liked the poem more than anything. It is my favorite poem. Again, thank you..GETS


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    April 20, 2006
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    Gosh this was soooooo beautiful. Very very very touching. I mean it really shows a lot of heart. It is so sweet. And the fact that it has a nice flow, and lots of imagery only makes it that much better! Fantastic Write and I'm truly sorry about your loss.


  • FightOffYourDemons
    April 20, 2006
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    This is Beautiful. I've always wanted to take a road trip and now I feel that I am a little closer to the real deal. You had an amazing flow. The way it sounds, the look, even the colors everything is just right. I'm sorry about the loss of your son, I'm sure he was amazing. I hope you're doing okay. Thanks for the poem.


  • AphroditeEnchained
    April 16, 2006
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    I want to start by expressing my sincere sorrow at the loss of a son you clearly loved so much. Rest assured that he would be so happy to read this.
    This piece is filled throughout with the simple affection you felt and still feel for your son. Beautiful.
    Thanks for entering
    -Aphrodite


  • April 6, 2006
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    Excellent

    Beautifully written and well done :-). A lovely and heartfelt tribute to you son. I was hooked from the beginning of the Journey. Keep on smiling my friend :-).

    Cheers
    Terry


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    March 11, 2006
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    hi..gets..I thought I commented on this but apparently not..my apologies.. I can see the pride in this ..as you should have those memories are so precious now as in the future.. thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest..
    Linda

  • disparate
    March 4, 2006
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    A touching story that you told, it saddened me to read it, but in a way it made me glad too.
    I'm glad you two had that trip together, that special memory you'll remember always, the pictures of course holding a great key.
    A beautiful memory aid, this poem an honour to his memory.


  • Pallas Athena
    March 1, 2006
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    I am truly amazed at everything you put into this write. Not only did you write a beautiful tribute to your son, but the pictures help to tell the story, in a way, that the words alone, may not have been able to. I have travelled across the country more than once, and know a some of what you wrote about. I am happy that you go to share such an awesome experience with your son. Athena


  • Dreamy Green Eyes
    February 24, 2006
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    Awesome!!!

    Wow! I am totally amazed with this write! Wiping the tears from my face, I realize how very blessed you are to have had this experience with Adam! Losing a child is a tremendous loss, and no words can make this pain totally disappear... I will keep you in my prayers and I hope you will always carry with you the memories that you created with your son! This is an awesome tribute!


  • Turtledove
    February 24, 2006
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    What a wonderful memory of you and your son. Adam is with the Lord, having taken his final "big" trip, now that was a "ride"! But I enjoyed your poetry technique with pictures and all. It is so sad, tears are still in my eyes. But I do feel a sense of joy too...knowing this life is not all there is, in His Name...Pastor Walt. (ps. I would applaud this piee a thousand times, but I'm out of points!)


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    February 24, 2006
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    i am going to cry. not only did you take me to where i want to go so desperately--Arkansas--but you made me feel a part of the road trip. thank you for sharing this wonderful, heartfelt and emotional story. (i want to copy the Arkansas sign-may I? it is my home and i live in oregon now.) thank you for sharing your life with me. viyanna r langager


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar gold member
    February 24, 2006
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    VERY TOUCHY

    As usual it is really a heartfelt write brinGing the tears in the eyes of the poet as well as The tears in the eyes of the readers too.The thoughts are very tuely stating the story of the painful heart .The bbeauty of this write lies in its depth of the work which is just limitless in terms of the emotions of the parents..A GREAT WRITE..I SALUTE YOU GETSBETTER

  • SurrenderMyHeart
    February 24, 2006
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    very good poem and im sorry about your son, you can tell how much u loved him, keep those memories alive.


  • crimsonshadow
    February 13, 2006
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    I love this as a tribute, I think the way you integrated pictures was absolutely lovely, and the emotions that this evokes make it truly special. However...it's feeling a bit more like a poem to me than a story...

    But I suppose that's up for debate, and I'll call it a story with a creative layout. Nice job on this, and thank you for sharing!

    -crimsonshadow-


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    February 2, 2006
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    excellent read

    This is a lovely tribute to your son and very cleverly laid out...I made that journey with you through all your words, it was fantastic...I am so sorry you don't have him in this life anymore but you have some amazing memories to help you get by...he will be looking down on you with pride and love...take care...~Lilac~


  • Maybe an Angel
    January 31, 2006
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    Beautiful. Just amazing. I'm speechless (which really doesn't happen to me ever). Great poem. Good luck in my contest!

    Rainy Day Tears


  • Lionslove silver member
    January 26, 2006
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    cantherebeanyother....

    tears....tears....Oh God.....just....love out to you....and tears. (and so impressed by the effort of layout of this labour of love: you truly are a great man!) atb, Tim


  • Damaged-Rose
    January 25, 2006
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    Very nice. I too went to North Caroilna. I also got to go to GreenBay Wisconcin. I was in Niarga Falls New York, but it was a short trip and i didn't get to see the falls. I am glad you have those memories of your son. Hold onto them tight and lock them away. It sadens me that so much time has passed since my sister, that i have to look at a picture to remember her smile.

  • unbroken5
    January 24, 2006
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    powerful message

    this piece defines hope and healing in expression/ It makes us all know how blessed we are. Your son would be so proud of you for writing this. That trip was a chance of a lifetime Im so happy you and your son were able to share it.

  • mellymae777
    January 15, 2006
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    WOW what an amazing poem. i'm sorry that thios happened. no one should have to deal with that kind of pain. i'm glad the memories you had with him were good. and just remember that he is in a better place now. i love the flow of your poem. i liked the way the words and pictures are set up. i think you did a superb job on this piece. nice job. keep it up. and remember that God is taking care of Adam.


  • Diablosanjil gold member
    January 15, 2006
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    wow so sad, to lose a child that you just got to know a little better is hard.May the angels be with you dear friend and thanks for sharing one of the last great memories you had with your son. very good write

  • Tantalizingtearz
    January 15, 2006
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    Masterfully done

    Wow, this looks like the work and effort put into it was worthwhile. I love how all the pictures really flow and fit in.. Your trip looks like it must have been amazing..Well done and thanx for the incredible read


  • Shh-Sues-Writing
    January 15, 2006
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    Beautiful!

    Such an awesome journey... I felt as if I traveled along side with you! You're so expressive! Again, applause for using a personal experience such as this; I could never do the same! I'm going to have to read the rest of your works now! This a beautiful piece!


  • pianoman13
    January 12, 2006
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    This must have been quite an experience. Very interesting and I believe this is how we should live life by enjoying the ride. I think this trip was well documented into an amazing flowing piece in which you showed your love in a clever way. Well done!!!


  • Shakes-spear
    January 8, 2006
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    This story is great and what memories it makes. Everywhere you go there will always be something that will trigger a memory. I envy you for taking this trip, I never did anything like this, but did take my kids to Cabo San Lucas one year and I cherish those memories. Thanks for letting me ride along with you on this one. God bless you, The Shaker


  • melodramatic emo
    January 8, 2006
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    beautiful

    hey this was beautiful thanks for sharing it with all of us sorry for your loss at least you have all your beautiful memories


  • getsbetter
    January 8, 2006
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    Thank you so much for your input Mr.Adams. I have been up all night and haven't even had a chance to proof read it. It's 8 am and just getting ready to do that now. God Bless you my friend, and i'm glad you liked it. These are my most important memories I have,GETS


  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    January 8, 2006
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    uplifting, poignant



    Bloody hell, mate. This made me cry. I guess that makes a good poem.

    Your adventure is so vivid and detailed. You remember it well. Did you take the photos during the visit or are some taken after?

    I was going to be brutally honest, but I can't, I have tears in my eyes.

    What is a "cup of 'joe?' must be an American term. I have not seen "jazzed" before, either. I am learning.
    their = there

    As always, your rhyme is good. Do you have a rhyming dictionary? I have one. Wish I could find it. My wife has packed it away somewhere.

    The strucure of your poem breaks down a little for me. The line lengths are not consistent and I feel you need thought to meter and syllables to bring soem depth into your poem. There is a great class on meter at the moment on "l;earn" up the top of the page.

    I wonder if I can put more than one picture in my poem. I wanted to write a longer ballad but I was afraid of the length. I note, however that you have written a long poem. I enjoy long poems. You have done a fantastic bit of poetry here and it is a credit to Adam's memory.


  • Xx Alice xX
    January 8, 2006
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    Thank goodness you have the memories of the trip, and so much more. So good of you to write them for us, I am sure you will never forget, but this will keep those meories forever.


  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    January 8, 2006
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    Wonderful poem and I have so many comments, I have to go to IM because my computer is playing up.

  • lightVdark
    January 8, 2006
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    OMG, i love this. i feel so sory 4 U !


  • The Eyes of a Angel
    January 8, 2006
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    Ths is good and i think yo are your son shared a lot fo memories. Am i am sure you both remember them. Well very good write your friend Angel

  • ezmwolf
    January 8, 2006
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    Its nice to see that a father and son got to share the things between them for I myself didnt get to share with my father. Very touching, Thank you for allowing me to read this bit of memory.

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