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Acrostic *Universe* -*Switcher*

Acrostic Universe Switcher

Universal Switcher is a Pixie Princess
Newly minted from the sun no less
In her hands are beams of light
Very beautiful they vanquish the night
Especial to her is the bright moon
Requiring powers to capture its boon
She uses bluebonnets in her Irish tea
Erin down to the Mediterranean sea.

She sings of wild lands like Africa
Where she carries game to America.
In the rainforests and plains
The trees love her name
Cheering as animals tame
Honor this Pixie the same.
Even the moon congratulates the sun
Requesting this Pixie come have her fun.
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by Iohagh


Author notes

Finally, Universe-Switcher is an ecologically conscious Pixie.  We needed one badly.
Written January 8th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    Universe Switcher I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust whenever someone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.

  • Iohagh
    January 8, 2006
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    All Pixies are friends to all other Pixies. Love ya. Ciao now.


  • Aureola
    January 8, 2006
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    awwwww! thx so much i was hoping the other day that youd make one for me too as i saw that you were making one for everyone! thats so cute!! and it definitely shows that you read my latest poem!!! i conclude that you liked it? thx again very much i'm very happy now! (in a pixieish way cuz all pixies love love loll) i'm gonna put it on my author page! you're gonna be my friend too loll. thx.
    xx
    universe

  • Iohagh
    January 8, 2006
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    If you like your poem, feature it so your friends can see it.


  • homegrown poet
    January 8, 2006
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    I sometimes find that acrostics are hard to do with some words. But it looks like you have done a fairly good job with it. This is definitely /your/ style. It's definitely not /mine/. Good work.

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