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Acrostic *DavesGirl0216*

Acrostic  DavesGirl0216

DavesGirl0216 is a super Pixie princess young
And from her chest love rises like the sun.
Verily her wings beat in eternal harmony
Every other Pixie shares her sweet agony.
She comes to her sweet human as he sleeps
Gosh she wonders can him I eternally keep.
In his mind his eyes open wide
Right then she decides to lie aside
Loving him more than she can hide.
0 is today's date she calls.
2 is the number of Pixie fall.
1 is this Pixie under man's thrall.
6 lifetimes she willingly surrenders it all.

by Iohagh

Author notes

DavesGirl0216 I took inspiration from one of your poems that hmm hmm hmm my teenage Pixielicious but nonetheless congradulations on your Pixie love and welcome aboard.
Written January 7th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    DavesGirl0216 I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust whenever someone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.

  • Iohagh
    January 8, 2006
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    Feature this if you like it.