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Waiting For The Future

You had me hanging by a thread
A small sliver of hope
It broke . .  once again
Because of to much pressure
Honesty is the best policy
But doesn't the truth hurt
When you fall you pick your self back up
I'm to tried to do it again
I'm waiting for an end in site
Not seeing one
I think I'll lie back down
And wait for the future to come
Because . .
I'm leaving the past in the past

Author notes

I think it might be time to move on.
Written January 7th, 2006

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  • January 9, 2006
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    Very good. The truth definately means the world in a relationship. Love is such a mysterious thing, it often comes on fast. It's hard to keep up sometimes. You don't want to know how it feels to be alone all you want to know is what the future holds. It's so hard to keep your head high when someone elses is hung so low. Anyways, great write. I hope things get better for you. Great write, Keep writing.


  • Katerina Ivanovna
    January 8, 2006
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    I like the finality of this piece, that's what really spoke to me. I think its a good poem, and I like the imagry in the beginning. Great write, and good job.

  • throwing the rocks
    January 8, 2006
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    Very excellent job. No words (that I can find) can describe the way that every line captured every emotion and feeling. Incredibly written.


  • silence711
    January 8, 2006
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    Wonderfully written. Everyone goes through times where you just want to sit there and let it all go on around you...while you do nothing. And yes, the truth DOES hurt sometimes...BUT...it's better to have the truth as it is...instead of having it sugar coated...because I've found that if it's sugar coated, it tends to hurt worse when you figure it all out.
    Keep writing.
    ~SC~


  • Jaydess
    January 7, 2006
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    Hey, I know how you feel, man. We all have our moments, but, to steal a quote from some movie or another, "You gotta start each day like it was on purpose." I think that's from Hitch... But oh well. It's a good thing to keep in mind, I believe.

    Excellent write, hon, and I hope all gets better for you.


  • Dances With Trees
    January 7, 2006
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    YAY SHANNON!! Bout time ya wrote something like this!! LoL! Anyways, I'm glad you are moving on! This was a really good poem! I liked it!

    Ptro Freak


  • daddyskisses
    January 7, 2006
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    hmm .. dont no wat to say really .. but i like this .. good work

    [=^allie^=]

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