I fall asleep
into a dream
but it's not a dream
it's a nightmare
I don't see anything
just me standing there
in a black deep hole
wondering how I got here
looking around
I hear a sound
it's someones scream
it sounds like a little girl
I look all around the deep dark hole
but I still hear her
the hole begins to close
I climb up the veins
and out the hole
I hear her scream
coming towards me
I look around
but I can't see
then all of a sudden
my world begins to shake
hearing her screaming
and seeing the world shaking
causes me to wake
in another dream
I see someone in the dark corner of my room
I hear a scream
then I finally wake up
and dad says "It's just another dream"
~Emily
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Written January 7th, 2006
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I love this! Just like i love you babe!!
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OH that is really a nightmare !!!
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thanxz im glad u liked it!! yea i thought of it right b4 i went to sleep lol
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Wow, that got me hooked from the first line....Really good poem, I liked the picture it painted, good job!
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Dreams are a conversation with oneself, a dialogue of symbols and images that takes place between the unconscious and conscious levels of the mind.
Try to be positive during the day in your conscious existence then when you go to sleep at night, your unconscious mind will have nice and beautiful dreams.
Take care my dear child and have pleasant dreams...
Don't worry too much!
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Very interesting twist in your poem... Dreams can take many forms.. but you must remember they play tricks on you, BUT your always in charge of your own dreams... Some times they take you back to dark times and others fill you with such joy and love.. It is up to you to deside what way your dreams will take you..
Nice writting..
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