Hush
Go to sleep
When you wake
It will all be a dream
Close those pretty Little eyes
So you wont see him die
Cover your ears. baby
It will scar you when he screams
So go hide under your bed....
And when you wake
He'll be dead
She's scared for life
He died in front of her
He was the only thing she had
What is to become of her
She sits alone and cry
She has nobody but her
She misses being daddy's little girl
Author notes
ok well its dark. and i mean itz twisted but i lyk it becuz i was n a weird state of mind at this point. so enjoy
Written January 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- Hate,Pain,Anger by Where Is Your Heart.
312 points, ended January 27, 2006, 39 entries
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What did you think
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A sad story... hope it didn't ring true for you. Very well written and pulled me in from the beginning.
Keep up the wonderful writing.
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thanx
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ahh thanx. umm i ges im jux in this state of mind. but thanx.
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thanx. but asu can see. i didnt, but o well
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wow. that crazy. but i like it.
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Dig it
Very dark, very dark indeed. Much different than anything I've ever read from you, and you know what? I like it
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wow. i hope you win something. tis is great. it's twisted, and im kinda weirded out but thats the contest. i think that itz dark and good luck
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yea. so umm thanx. and ill wait til the contest end for me to know ur desition. thanx
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I like this. It's dark and twisted like you said. poor little girl.
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