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Final Good-bye

Life has just gotten to hard.
Things are getting crazy.
I need to let it all go,
And just leave everything behind.
I don't know what my purpose is,
Nor well i ever find out.
I just want to say good-bye,
To the life i have right now.
I just want to say i love you,
To all my family and friends.
I did not do this to hurt you,
I just needed it all to end.
So please don't be sad,
And please don't cry.
For you see I'm better off,
Looking over you from the sky.
So just know that i love you,
And this is my final good-bye.

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Written January 7th, 2006

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  • AMEgirly
    March 14, 2006
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    wow this is very strong. u had such powerful emotion in your words. u definatly i hav a talent 4 writin these kind of poems! keep it up! ill havta read more of ur poems later!


  • Da-Lyricologist
    January 7, 2006
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    Nice poem I like the way you made it rhyme.. Could you do me a favor and read my new poem "Just a Dream" and tell me what you think.. Thanxs