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 The Rose of My Mind

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I am glaring, glaring out at a planet
of madness and strife,
insanity, stupidity, conflict, and debate
of which I am all-too-willing and eager to participant in...


 

and there is a soft hand upon my shoulder...


 

I am rebelling, clashing, questioning, in dispute
with all of humanity,
my teeth are bared, my fists are clenched
I am ready to take my cause into the streets...


 

and there is a silent whisper in my ear...


 

I am ready to conquer, to achieve and prevail
at all endeavors, and climb the ladders of success.
I have it all and I am ready to go forth and use it...


 

and a warm body pressed up against mine...


 

Now is the time! I am going out to ascend the heights
and reach the pinnacles of society...
I march toward the door and through it out into the world,
no one is going to stop me or get in my way!


 

and I hear a soft crying...


 

I get in my car and reach for the ignition,
my mind ablaze with the bright future before me,
and with all those whom I would slay on my rise to the top...


 

and I see a saddened silhouette in the doorway...


 

In my mind I could see it- me at the top,
the battles won, the mêlée past,
standing triumphant with...


 

and my mind freezes...


 

I turn off the ignition and get out of the car.
I return to a soft hand, a silent whisper,
a warm body, a saddened silhouette softly crying
in the doorway, and I finally see...
success is a rose, a rose right before me.


 

 


 

 

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  • Candy6
    April 27, 2007
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    good job


  • dark-idle-pixie
    January 9, 2006
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    so much truth and a perception that many fail to see


  • Gwenevere
    January 8, 2006
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    A lovely poem written from the heart, lovely


  • January 7, 2006
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    Beautiful poem

    This is such a beautiful poem.. not only that it is written so well, but so much sincerity and wholeheart outlook of life..Oftentimes the more relevant aspects are forgotten in the pursuit of personal happiness and satisfaction.. but the real truth of what matters are the moments we live to the fullest of those that care the most for us. Like a child who wanders around a beach collecting seashells to carry back home, we gather events and moments that occur during our lives. We cannot hold on to days, they pass. But we can retain memories.
    You have written a poem with so much enlightment of the what is important in our existence. Heartfelt poem that I feel written straight from your heart.
    Thank you so much my brother tomerick for being supportive, and kindhearted and most of all having the love and compassion to our dear sister agent 007.


  • wbiro gold member
    January 7, 2006
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    Thanks, sue... and now I'm off to your page to welcome you to AP!


  • Shh-Sues-Writing
    January 7, 2006
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    i love the way you expressed a hope.. i read it a few times because i couldn't get enough of it! incredible work!


  • wbiro gold member
    January 7, 2006
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    thanks, Oh Grandest Aunt! I hope you're doing well this new year...


  • suseann
    January 7, 2006
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    You do understand what is important in lifes journey.Nice one nefew! Beautiful write.~~Suseann


  • vampira1665 silver member
    January 7, 2006
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    Not to be a bummer but I kinda think life is over-rated. BUT, I am starting to see more than I did before, the beauty, the softness. But the world is slowing dying due to alot of different things, mostly placed here by people. And there are so many people that don't care, are cruel etc etc. I will be happiest when it is over and we are all in a happier place where 'man' can not distroy it.

    This was beautiful tho my dear partner in death.

    Hugs and bites, Lady Raven

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