Dad, you're the best
You're cooler than all the rest
My friends dads' give them neglect
But I know no one is perfect
They get to kind of see what it's like to have a dad
Which I know isn't bad
You treat them like they're yours
And you never let them get bored
Everyone think you are crazy
But hey, at least you're not lazy
We always have a lot of fun
After all the work is done
I wrote this to tell you how much I appreciate you
And how much I love you too!
Author notes
I wrote thsi to my dad, Gary Spaw!
Written January 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- Number One Dad/Daughter by Malzy.
500 points, ended January 9, 2006, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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thanks for hosting this contest i hope that i win this one, but let the best poem win! thanks for reading this writting of mine!
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Hey!!
Thanks for entering, my bestfriends dad was a fatherly figure for me for a few years and now my father is the guy a lot of people, as in my friends, go to because hes just like that.
Thanks for entering and good luck.
Malzy
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