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The love of a woman



I want the love
of a woman
the melting
bonding
spiritual
sensual
coming together
of two beings
totally absorbed
in the pleasure of
each other
holding no prejudice
no fears
no taboos
only the need to feel warmth
and love
to trace kisses
along the soft places
and to embrace
in the ways lover embrace.
My frustration
of not having
makes the need stronger
and the chance
urgent.
Love me just once.

The experience
of making love
should be everything
two lovers want it to be.

Free
complete
uninhibited

Their bodies
should quiver
with every kiss
every touch
from ear lobe
to neck
to stomach
to inner thigh
to foot
it should be spiritual
emotional
physical
and erotic.
Tony Sexton

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My dream
Written January 7th, 2006

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  • shimmer
    January 8, 2006
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    this is real good and also very sad and lonely. the writings i have read of yours so far has been sensual and you managed to put that into this piece as well. great writing.

  • Kinky Lil Devil
    January 7, 2006
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    awww tony *hugs* i like this but it reminds me of an ad *blinks* i still like it thought bravo ^^


  • spacewench
    January 7, 2006
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    encouringing

    It's a real change to hear a mans view of wanting something so bad. The poem delivers the feeling of desire so simply.


  • Dygurl
    January 7, 2006
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    wow awsome write. That's it. that's all. it is absalutely and awsome write.