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Acrostic *Feather * *Snowfly*

Acrostic  Feather Snowfly

Feather Snowfly in the forest deep
Elightens places too horrible to peep
And my Pixie she challenges dark skies
The hobgoblins and trolls always surprise.
How her love and wisdom grows as delights
Except that magic is always made of light
Riding upon her wings as feathery as kites.

She spans the treetops alighting on shore
Noticing the Pixie lights bright in lore
Our Elfin friends in caves ignore their chores
We as Pixies live only to love and light implore.
For Pixification leads us to write
Loving each other and even denizens of the night
Yes we fly to balance evils and do (w)rites.

By Iohagh

Author notes

I am not as good as Ayizan so I hope you will forgive and I pray for great poetesses to join and with Pixies to live. But welcome to our family and my poor support forgive.
Written January 7th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    Feather Snowfly I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust whenever someone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.


  • Entwining Beauty
    January 7, 2006
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    thank yu for you'r welcome,i changed my name from celtic - angel to somthing nobody else has i like to be different,there seemed to be a lot of celts out there.i tfounda great sit where you type in your propper name and they give you a pixie name .thank you the lovely poem.