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Ode to E.W.

You eyes draw me in every time.
I look at your face and I sigh in longing.
You'll never know
The love I bear for you.
The smile I reserve just for you.
The words I say only for you.
As long as we both shall live,
I will love you.
And you will not be aware of my presence.
But just seeing you will be enough

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Written January 7th, 2006

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  • la vie boheme
    January 7, 2006
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    I think that we all have felt this way. I really like this poem, I think that it is one of you best. I sense very little hope in here, you will find a very special person who will love you to death and not only be aware of your presences, but adore your presence. You are definantly worth that. lol...sorry, the poem flows very well and the emotion comes through very well..................................(...).....I like periods.....................