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Acrostic *Ayizan* *Flies* *Alone*

Acrostic Ayizan Flies Alone

Ayizan has taken right to just now fly alone
Yet Pixieland envisioned grand is no longer her home
I pray and say Pixie Ayizan for your love and light
Zandor so far away is close to Pixies at night
Always know we Pixies are not all from Dixie
Never forget your Pixie heart so written in fantasy.

Fantasy and whimsy keeps us Pixies eternally young
Love grows from our souls flitting joyously in the sun
I love sisters, even wingless ones, showering in morning dew
Especially great prosaic writers who write as well as you
So after you flew, Pixies asked for editing like you do.

All I can say is we lost our precious Ayizan who
Left our glen and bower of fantasy to withdrew
Oh how my sisters cried for Ayizan by name
Never to hold her hand or to play Pixie games.
Every time I hear Ayizan I cannot be the same.

by Iohagh

Author notes

Ayizan, I personally apologize for us Pixies being so disorganized. We didn't know what we were doing and now that some of us are finally getting it together and asking each other how to write or crit just whimsy, rhyme and fantasy, someone of your stature we lost due to our stumbling Pixieness. I am sorry personally and I apologize. May you go with God to have and to share light and love in the world. Know we are always here dear and darling sister of loving the world.
Written January 7th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    Ayizan I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust whenever someone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.


  • CoolHandLuke
    January 7, 2006
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    ahhh...a beautiful piece for a beautiful person.


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    January 7, 2006
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    This is lovely, I really like it A little disorganised huh? You'll have to tempt her back with newly polished organisational skills You've mastered your acrostics now Love you. Fairymoms La x


  • B Chandler
    January 7, 2006
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    awwwwwwwww ty so much for the poem i simply love it
    rae