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Acrostic *Moonling* *Justices* * *Sword*

Acrostic Moonling Justices Sword

Moonling Pixie loves lands of light
Our sword of justice protects us right
Opposing wrong in deed and song
Now all Pixies do sing along
Loving justice and peace from us
I think sometimes she likes to fuss
Ready to fight all types of myths.
Granted Moonling is made for this.

Justice is needed by Pixies all
Us Pixies lights so big as we are small
So Moonling carries her big sword
Two inches long, most Pixies cannot afford.
I see Moonling's heart being always renewed
Chasing off hobgoblins and trolls too
Except that Moonling sometimes feel blue.
She needs a hug from any Pixie true.

Secrets Moonling keeps under an old log
Where a prince once changed into a frog
Our Pixie blooms rise blithely nearby
Returning to hollows as children come by
Dancing with unicorns in waterfalls they spy!*

by Iohagh

Author notes

Moonling's heart of fluff
expands as protecting us
it might blow up
showering with angel dust.
Written January 7th, 2006

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  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    Moonling I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust whenever someone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.


  • moonling
    January 8, 2006
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    lohagh,you've done a fabulous job again! Sorry about the name change tho. Lol sometimes I just don't think.
    Pixie peace & love to ya.

  • moonling
    January 7, 2006
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    :D

    Ooh, LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! This is the first time anybody;s written a poem for me lol!

    lohagh, you're the most talented and loving PIXIElicious person I know lol! This is WICKED! Thank you SOOOO much for brightening my day!

    Pixie Zorg (Roz)

    p.s. my random word for the day: BANANAS lol


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    January 7, 2006
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    I really like this and you've captured Zorg very well She'll love this Thanks for sharing. Fairymom La x