When I look at you
I see the ocean in your eyes
Full of essence and beauty
That fills within the skies
A child of love within
Who needs to remember
The nurturing of a mother
And daughter being together
In you I see strength
A determined being of truth
I see love and understanding
I see Beauty in Essence with you
I realize people are different
You're unique in your own way
Uniqueness lies within your heart
You're in mine every day
When I see you, My child
I see my own beautiful creation
The world was blessed with you
On your birth celebration
Author notes
Written January 7th, 2006
A contest entry
- Baby! by AngelEyes13.
300 points, ended December 8, 2007, 14 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW Powerful!
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Powerful
Oh wow. This is probably one of the best poems I've read so far. It's soo full of emotion. Great write and thank you soo much for entering my contest. -
beautiful words
such an overwhelming sense of love to be shared here. seems you have a good, very good heart. thanks for allowing me to read.
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Beautiful
This is such a wonderful and creative piece! Individuality is something to be celebrated and I'm sure your daughter will truly love this amazing write when she's old enough to appreciate it. A mother's love for her child is undeniably the strongest bond ever. Thanks so much for your entry and good luck!
~Lori
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I realize people are different
You're unique in your own way
Uniqueness lies within your heart
You're in mine every day
i love the way this speaks of individuality even while passing on such a beautiful message -
its soo beautiful... n soo refined. wow!
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WHEN I SEE YOU, MY CHILD
I SEE MY OWN BEAUTIFUL CREATION
THE WORLD WAS BLESSED WITH YOU
ON YOUR BIRTH CELEBRATION
this is so very beautiful from you. you daughter is blessed to have a mother who writes so very well. viyanna r langager -
I REALIZE PEOPLE ARE DIFFERENT
YOU'RE UNIQUE IN YOUR OWN WAY
UNIQUENESS LIES WITHIN YOUR HEART
yet . . . perfect innocence is antithetical to uniqueness, is it not? -
great write
beutiful write. for some reason it make me invision a pregnant woman speeking to her unborn child. i feel hope and aspiration for the child shine through this poem.
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