Acrostic "Blueyes"
Blueyes believes in sight and has a great mind.
Love is in her writes affected by a logic kind.
Under a waterfall, she watches as fate passes by
Erring only to count as plops and mud pies fly.
Yet love stalks Blueyes' heart and lights her soul.
Each thought of love becomes rainbows beyond control
So Blueyes comes to Pixieland to restore herself whole.
By Iohagh
Janet McCall
Author notes
I have only read Blueyes poetry which I will one day go back to comment upon and that gives me this insight. If I am wrong, please correct me Blueyes.
Written January 7th, 2006
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Darling
At the time, blueyes had a picture of a drowned angel on her page and that was part of the must. Here I took the water that in pscyhology represents passion and used it as something healing. Smoosh
Janet -
What a wonderful poem, very descriptive and sweet. Can imagine her standing there under the waterfall. Does the waterfall stand for anything? Is she using it to hide herself from the world around her? was just curious.
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blueyes I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust whenever someone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.
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i think this is a beautiful and sweet poem that describes well emotions and visions this pixie has an obvious inner strength love and beauty lol abigailxx
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I know somebody here who will be proud to see and read your acrostic poems because he is fun of acrostic poetry - romantic heart. Very nice verses, honest and with a lot of respect to Blueaeys.
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This is a beautiful poem, lohagh. I'm always fascinated by good acrostic. Well done!
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Beautiful.
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I really like this one, you've chosen your words very well & I'm sure Blueyes will absolutely love it
Very well done & thank you for sharing. Fairymom La x
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