Acrostic Forever Loving Jay
Forever Loving Jay, Pixie girl, there's a light in you
Overcoming all dark it attracts all Pixies too
Rising from your dark blacker than tarnished marks.
Every orphan Pixie is a part of your forest park
Vanquishing by your impression light defying repression
Even as Gothic self treason ruled thee and all you see
Reason climbed heights unfolding wings alight with glee.
Love answers your prayer and promises to take you there
Our gently held hands following heart's commands to share
Visiting the ends of time where all hidden is revealed
Inside eternity all pains and draughts are healed.
No better friend you have save Pixies who defend.
Go don your gossamer shield protecting innocence again.
Jay we blow you name on windless nights floating like kites
And wonder if you will do what you always know is right.
Yes Pixies love you as your love construes our delights.
by Iohagh
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My Pixie cousin who is smarter than I.
Written January 6th, 2006
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forever loving jay I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust whenever someone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.
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crystaldust 08-01-06 17:13
Lovely Iohagh, this is just so empathic, wonderful, loving, so you. I agree with your Fairymom Lax that you should find a contest to post this in so that everyone can see it as well as us pixies. More love, more blessings, pixiegram. -
This is a beauty
Go find a contest to put it in & allow it the praise it deserves 
Bless your golden heart 
Thanks for sharing. Love you. Fairymom La x 
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Aw! Thank you cuzzy! I appreciate the kind words in this. I loved it!
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i like this. a beautiful acrostic poem.
awesome job. -
another awesome write
Iohagh it is a beautiful thing you are doing.. writting for all these people.. it is truly a wonderful Pixie you are.. thank you for being you... thank you for sharing your words with me and all of us.. well done.
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