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Acrostic *EtherealforU*

Acrostic EtherealforU

EtherealforU my Pixie I believe your heart that heaves
That isn't stone or trees which feel not love's breeze.
How mankind does evil and vile hatefulness still
Except for us Pixies filling with love against the ill.
Reaching into dark places though frightening, threatening so
Each Pixie heart beats oh powerful to deliver its special glow.
A light guiding right from blindness produces sight
Leaving the cleave of night to follow to Pixie light
For rising like cherub angels past where others fell
Or cannot you ever tell such lightning from my yells.
Raining love from clouds as graceful tears cleans your face
Under the starry sky love has no disgrace in this safe place.

by Iohagh

Author notes

Pixie fly in packs but some fly alone and with EtherealforU her heart is every other Pixie's home.
Written January 6th, 2006

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  • Ethereal One gold member
    January 9, 2006
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    etherealforu


  • Iohagh
    January 9, 2006
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    EtherealforU I put your name on this poem so you will get Pixie dust whenever someone comments on the smell of your poem's flowers.


  • Iohagh
    January 7, 2006
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    Fairies and pixies dark
    become hobgoblins as stark
    contrast to Pixie parks
    sharing one blissful heart.


  • Fearnloathing
    January 7, 2006
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    Too bad I could never become a pixie, but oh well Demons have wings 2. Beutifull poem by the way as always.


  • Iohagh
    January 7, 2006
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    My darling morbid soul
    are you a troll
    your love without control
    which you cannot know.

    Oh yes we Pixies
    eat of sweet fantasy
    of light's so lovely
    wherever love may be.

  • Chocolate Poetry
    January 7, 2006
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    If only I could find such a place that existed! This is a magical piece of art filled with emotional imagery. You did a fantastic job portraying pixies, which are one of the most dazzling mythical creatures to ever exist... which yes, they DO exist. ;-)

    Brandon


  • Iohagh
    January 7, 2006
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    The idea is to give each Pixie a little flame that they can blow into a great fire and you are doing that Ms. Pixielicious. Whoosh, Love the World. Ciao now.


  • Ethereal One gold member
    January 7, 2006
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    excellent writing

    I can't stop reading this Iohagh. It is so beautiful. I really, really love it!!!!!
    You are the sweetest PIXIE of all........

    etherealforu


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 6, 2006
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    '...A light guiding right from blindness produces sight Leaving the cleave of night to follow to Pixie light For rising like cherub angels past where others fell Or cannot you ever tell such lightning from my yells...' Very cool, my pixie niece...I see Jeanette was immeasurably pleased, as well she should be...lovely sentiments within, Janet... Wanda
    Edited on Jan 06, 8:19 p.m. because ''.


  • Entwining Beauty
    January 6, 2006
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    such a loving verse,it is beautiful.


  • Laura Lamarca gold member
    January 6, 2006
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    This is lovely


  • Ethereal One gold member
    January 6, 2006
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    very well written

    I am honored pixie Iohagh. You did such a wonderful job with my name. I will treasure it always.
    Thank you.
    etherealforu

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