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It's Only A Memory Right?

Simple touches
of unforgotten sins
leave you cold and alone
crying on the bedroom floor

Hug yourself tightly
wrap your arms around your knees
imagining the touch
is one from him

lye in your
shadows of uncertainty
breathing in
the breath of your confusion

let the memories
guide your tears
down your cheeks
and land close to your heart

simple touches
of unforgotten sins
leave you cold and alone
crying on the bedroom floor

~It's only a memory, Right?~

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Written January 6th, 2006

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  • Aly-Girl
    March 8, 2006
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    awww

    awww.. this is really good... n really true to anyone with either a broken heart or bad memories.... great poem hun.. i loved it!!!
    <3
    Aly


  • no1special
    February 5, 2006
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    wow really nice!!!
    This is so good but really sad babe ... care to esplain?
    I love you
    xox


  • Decorus Somnium
    January 14, 2006
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    awww!!!amazing!really great piece of work.love it...it's just...EXELENT!Keep writing
    Best Wishes
    ~LostMermaid~

  • bleedingarms
    January 11, 2006
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    Thank you!


  • Trubldprincess
    January 11, 2006
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    very good very good. i like this one alot.
    from Lil Casper

  • bleedingarms
    January 10, 2006
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    Wow, thats an amazing saying. I love it, and will definately remember that one. Thanks for the comment and the other applause. It is pointless to tell someone to forget what happend to them, it never goes away.


  • MisJudged
    January 9, 2006
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    this also reminds me of one of my sayings though 'slit my writsts and watch me bleed, now tell me its only a memory' meaning that the memories still hurt and people telling you to forget about it is just pointless because all that will do is make you feel worse.

  • MisJudged
    January 9, 2006
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    I hate memories. This is a really good poem to portray the memories though. It was horrificly vivid, bringing back a few of my own memories. keep this up. it was really good.
    Allie

  • bleedingarms
    January 7, 2006
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    aw, hun, i really didnt mean to make this poem so that ppl would have the memories come back. but i hope your doing alright. thanks for the comment and applause. take care, k? ~Kiersten~

  • emptymind
    January 7, 2006
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    I loved this poem, it was so real!! I also had tears in my eyes when i read it cause it took me back to my memories i'm trying to block out gr8 write
    ~Kate~

  • bleedingarms
    January 7, 2006
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    Thank you


  • MissCassie
    January 7, 2006
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    There were already tears in my eyes. This was pretty awesome..
    Great write

  • bleedingarms
    January 6, 2006
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    Thanks so much. Its a hard thing right? Take care. ~Kiersten~


  • Janetheplain
    January 6, 2006
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    beautiful

    AWWWW this is sad. It brought tears to my eyes, its very beautiful. I can relate to this, but you shouldn't cry for the memories. Well done!! Best of luck Jane

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