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Spider Lovers

when spider hearts collide
love tastes like supernova
we stretch our feelers to each other
and open up ourselves
inserting my first little pedipalp
into your gorgeous genital
I watch it all inflate inside you
and less than in a minute
when I prick
the second one
my heart will stop
beating
and you eat me
my hungry spider lover

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Written January 6th, 2006

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  • e-ndrus
    January 7, 2006
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    Thanks, Quinn! Yeah, oh, those poor male spiders!


  • January 7, 2006
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    apparently the female praying mantis also consumes the unlucky male. this is a quirky sorta poem, you don't come across material like this around here, but its so refreshing and beautiful. congrats on such a unique and beautiful piece!
    -quinn

  • e-ndrus
    January 6, 2006
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    Thanks! Btw, my description is quite precise. Male spider is said to die after copulation and then a female partner devours the poor thing.


  • Cyanide Milkshake
    January 6, 2006
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    Lol, wow, that was awesomely detailed and delicate. x