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friend? sorry but im leaving you.

When you need me to say 'I love you to',
How can I say 'Im leaving you?'
You dont even treat me well
putting me through constant hell.
I've finally been able to make up my mind.
Now im leaving everything behind.
and its all because of you,
for all the stuf you put me through,
somtimes we were fine
managed to have a realy great time
but to them my mind and body are numb
because of when the bad times come
The emotionaly abuseive games
gave me constant pounding pains
my mind switches of to life
i begin to fail
my world was turning stale.
but honey im not gonna fail because of you
im gonna start again. a fresh. a new
so sorry but I'm leaving you.



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Written January 6th, 2006

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  • Love-is-Eternal
    April 10, 2006
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    i know exactly how that goes. you did a really good job putting it into words. i liked it.


  • Jules1
    March 27, 2006
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    did you want me to find this?

    hey i really hope this isnt true
    im confussed and i dont know what your trying to say is this really true is this really about me?
    i dont understand how have i not treated you well?
    i wish i read this sooner before you left college.
    before this all got out of hand our so it seems by your poem
    im sorry you feel this way if this really is because of me but i really dont understand what i might have done to make you feel like this

    ill speak to you later

    love Jules xxx

  • Darkbabe
    January 6, 2006
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    you mispelled "stuff" and really" just to let you know so anyone else dont let you know and try to be rood about it lol but great write. keep it up.
    XOXO
    Brittney