Acrostic Mystic Enchantress & Brokenpen
Mystic Enchantress collaborates one love the word
Yes heard bleating in herds and flocks of birds.
So she flies over seas following her kissed breeze
To her beloved at once ease to whom her love appease.
In all nature her call summons only love, love, love.
Calling love truly thereof upon doves flying above.
Enchanting is her Pixie writes so bright
Now lit by love's light beyond human sight
Come brighten and penetrate the darkest night.
He hears and alights upon a phoenix rises
And though desire compromises joys she epitomizes.
Never does her ElfLord ever her love criticize.
Through the thrall of the darkest light
Revealed shining towards her elf's might
Elan gentle, right with a soul completely contrite.
So Mystic Enchantress inside his soul sees
Such dreams as these blush even trees so free.
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Brokenpen, oh Noble ElfLord, who has wooed her heart
Receiving love as his wealth caught by Pixie arts
On him a magic rule for elves into her light departs
Kindness to treat all just pushes shadows of dark
Even leprechauns, trolls and magic dragon's trust
Never will the ElfLord's heart so protected go bust.
Perhaps this year in cheer, he writes to her clear
Entering Pixie hearts dear bringing his beloved near.
by Iohagh
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Mystic Enchantress & Brokenpen, Pixie and Elf, are friends with poetic benefits.
Written January 6th, 2006
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Lovers I put your names on this poem so you will get Pixie dust as anyone comments on the smell of your poem's bloom.
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wow, two poets honored in a poem amazing, the power of the poetic word can do alot, this is a great poem honoring to amzing people, keep it flowing
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Beautifully Penned!
I have no words to express my gratitude for having taken the time to praise not only my work on this beautiful Acrostic but the love Steven and I share so openly. I am in total awe and while I was writing my eyes got teary... This is a very beautiful Acrostic Iohagh... you have no idea how magnificent it felt inside to have seen such wonderful work... it is always great to be validated. Your pen is a fbulous one and I am as well as Steven very honored to have such beautiful work written for us. Thank you for sharing it with us and for the wonderful gift of your ever lovely pen. Blessed be, Nena ♥ -
We are a small growing group of Pixie poets and our name is "Pixieland Pixies from Dixie and from other wondrous places". Our leader is the Grand Duchess Pixie Lepekaha from South Texas. Email her if you like. My AP Mommy and Grannie are Queen Sonja of the Tender Hearts and Crystaldust of Joy, who started all this from Europe. The Joy motto is "Love the World" and we flit around putting angel dust on those in love. Think about it since both Brokenpen, admitted as an elf, and Mystic Enchantress as a Pixie have joined us. We'd love to have y'all. Ciao now. I remain Crown Princess Iohagh of Joy's Tender Hearts.
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thanks for correcting me on your name, and I'll keep it in mind. and I love Zayra...she's been a light to me and an inspiration since I read her very first poem here on AP.
and you really did a wonderful job with the acrostics here...If you only knew my acrostic attempts!!!
Jo -
How very beautiful this is, my friend! An awesome dedication to my brother and sister! I loved this! Your heart was showing wonderfully as you penned this! Thank you for sharing!
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Hi NoWayJo, I am glad you love them. My name by the way starts with an "i" or "I" and not an "L". You are a great writer yourself and I know because my big AP sister Zayra Yves wrote some for you and I read it with much appreciation. I never had a chance to say this before but if my sister loves you and wrote that poem about the poet from the 60's about you, I like you. Ciao now.
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when I read these acrostics I'm always amazed how people are able to write such beautiful poetry with the constraints of this form, AND you have also added the difficulty of rhyme. really excellent writing, Lohagh, and I'm sure both Mystic Enchantress and Broken Pen are touched by this write!
Jo -
Iohagh wrote this grannyeri.. sorry if i confused you by posting in in our group im's.
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EXCELLENT JOB!!!!!
This is certainly a beautiful acrostice to two fantastic people that feel and have such a lovely feeling towards each other! Excellent write, I know that they will both love thi, a lot! Thanks for sharing, Angel
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Wow - what a wonderous picture - so sensual, ust like the exquisitely written verses of this poem. Great collaboration between the two of you - you make it seem so easy.
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hope that made sence.. thank you much..
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awesome write
Iohagh as i read this my eyes flowed with the joy of pixie dust filled tears rolled down my faces. it is one this to be in love and share this feeling with just the one i love . but to have others support and love in seeing our feelings for eachother and to be celabrated by others is a wonderful thing. your have spun a magical ward on the two of us. my heart is filled with a amorus warmth i am completly blowen away by the beauty of your words dedicated to two lovers. two other poets muse of eachother. may angels lift you to the heavens for the celabration of joyous tears you have made flow from my elven blue eyes. i love the words you have given me. and i am sure Nena will cry as well.. you are the dancing lights of love above the two lovers together in the night.. thank you beloved sister.. you are a true artist. thank you my friend..
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Wow this was beautiful probably one of the best you have ever written and you always have an awsome picture to go with it.
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I bet they're going to love these acrostics, Iohagh. I think they are gorgeous, exhilarating and full of love. Bravo pixie. Pixie blessings and love. gram.
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