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Black

Black
Dark
Dreary night,
No light.
Evil thoughts,
Demon spirits.
I break the silence,
with your screams.
Black
Death
Blood stained.
Black
Dark
Death
Demon inside,
breaks free.
Free to roam
free to kill.

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Written January 6th, 2006

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  • Erotik Rose silver member
    January 7, 2006
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    why this is very good, i like it and yes the demon does roam, love you much.


  • Daeron-Obsidian
    January 6, 2006
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    Deep

    wow, thats really good, really dark, and as you've guessed I like the dark poetry. I really enjoyed this piece and hope to see more of your works soon! Have fun!

    DeathEmperorDaeron


  • Without-A-Reason
    January 6, 2006
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    wow rele dark kinda scared lmao just kidding good poem thow*thumbs up*